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master of decadence.

Journal Entry: Sun Sep 23, 2012, 4:44 PM
Although it might not seem so, she had been the killer in the crowd; that night she had come to hunt them all down. No mercy, she did it one by one. Surprised? Allow me to explain, such devil, such wicked heart, black and untamed. Afraid? Listen close now; her show is about to commence.

She hisses, she snarls, and she whispers, and she laughs. She's the prettiest of all, with evil mind, sweetly to prowl. Bony fingers of long sharp nails, her lovely hands were made to tear flesh. But fragile she is and one day she might break. Just a beautiful sinner now wasted away. Oh, such enchanting cadaver, dancing and dead.

And as she keeps dancing she starts pulling you down. Down into a dark place you alone would never have found. You shout, stupidly unbowed. But sadly at night, only silence is loud. And as her silhouette continues to skulk, twirling around, you finally understand. She's the master, a queen with no crown.

And although her heart is cold and her teeth are sharp, she once had been human like us, so keep that in mind. She will love you. She will force you. She'll leave you behind. First you'll be falling, last you'll be blind.


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chordata1 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i would say it is you who is the master
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Lost313 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Very indepth i loved it! makes me sad though like i can relate in my own personal way from a current experience
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Kezulos Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
Really enjoyed this!
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MonicawiththeCamera Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is so beatuiful, i can't even put into words how inspiring it is. :3
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aubreyhh Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Very descriptive, creates quite the visual. Appeals to many senses. I love it.
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Gingerninjachan Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Your way of writing is just...woah...i wish i could write like that *0*
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QueenJunko98 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful poem :)
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think you could submit this as a deviation. It's pretty great. :)
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Leoren Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Did you just write this from your imagination? Either way, this is dark and beautiful!
Hmm...excuse me while I make sure all my guns are loaded and within reach.
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crooked-clockwork Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012   General Artist
Awesome!
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