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Sick

Journal Entry: Mon Aug 6, 2012, 2:34 PM
He could hear it, the bloody figure walking behind him over nimble feet. Then his eyes were forced to close as cold, bony fingers covered his sight. Nails like claws buried deep into his cheek as she breathed softly, surely bloody lips drawn into that scornful smile he both loved and detested.

"You're mine."

And then she was gone, back into the sweet torments of his mind. And then, like venom, she left him on the floor, dead and strangely calm.




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I had to get this out of my head.
I know, I'm weird.

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:iconparya-t:
Mood: Love ~Parya-T Sep 6, 2012   Traditional Artist
I don't think it is sick or weird or anything, I found it lovely and sexy!
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:iconvalkvick:
~valkvick Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is so interesting! I hope to see you develop this more - either with writing or your wonderful photos. That is if you want to of course lol.
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:iconfollowintheblackbird:
*FollowinTheBlackBird Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent! Made me feel like I was watching from the shadows. For such a short piece it really grabs you.
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:iconhorrorfantastic15:
Mood: Love ~HorrorFANtastic15 Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Daaang. I really, really enjoyed that. You kind of just inspired me haha.
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:iconavalanchepark:
probably better out of your head

interesting but totally unexpected
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:iconbananasugar67:
~bananasugar67 Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this. It's sick but yet capturing.
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:iconstarfox2o12:
Wow, very neat
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:iconclavis-salomonis:
Mood: Wow! *Clavis-Salomonis Aug 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing
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:icondholms:
'sweet torments of his mind.'

sweet indeed.

very nice.
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~Maya-amer Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was very well written
creepy, weird and a lil scary i love it :)
u should give it a proper beginning and turn it into a story... I'd love to read it <3
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