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the soldier. by Senju-HiMe the soldier. by Senju-HiMe
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Crabs are scary, I promise they were alive!

Self-portrait

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from my Instinct series:
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First of all originality is so important for photography. And composition if it is belongs to you. This is such a great work and brave one. For the impact fascinating believe me. But there are some problems. Such as Resolution. We have to see that with original resolution. Another problem is depth of field. create more space for photos like that one. Next You could take enitire head. And her hairs could be more effective with a style. The last reason is photoshop or the nother one which is you used for that. Her lips and eyes are not looking real. If you want to do art try to be more realistic for portraits. But you want to do fashionable things you can do what ever want.

Glad for critique..
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Hi, strong portrait, fashion portrait. But not the best in your gallery. If I will compare this with your others, it is not that excellent. But lets talk just about this picture. Beautiful model(you? wow), indeed. Nice idea and composition with crabs/animals. It is good that model is naked, then is here conection between human nature and animal. But that make-up is too much and it disturbs that mentioned conection. I would prefer more natural makeup here.
Skin need maybe some better retouch it you want make perfect (for example fashion, or commercial) shot, because the face has complete different skin as body.. that seem visualy as mistake. I do not like contrast, it is too much and hard, more lighst and less shadows can make this photo better I think. That is my opinion. I like your mesmerizing eyes but I can see that they are not showed in natur way, so for me too much photoshop contrast at levels/curves and the same colors. keep goin ;) best wishes from Slovakia. m.
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thejimmyjames Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Those crabs are badass, but your eyes are intense <3

Awesome shot.
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DesireeDelgado Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
No había visto esta foto, se me había pasado! La verdad es q no sé como pudiste acercarte a la boca un cangrejo tan grande, espero que no te entallara el labio con la pinza!
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AntonyCastellanos Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Professional Photographer
amazing work!
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FabioKeiner Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
besame mucho, cantaba el cangrejo antes que lo metieron en la olla
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JACAC Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
a l w a y s . a m a z i n g
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malaugusto Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013   Photographer
This gorgeous work has been featured here: People and Portraits Spotlight Vol. 70.
Looking forward to seeing more art from you at #devPREMIUM!

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Squidly888 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Wow! This is just A W E S O M E! Very original! And you and the crabs look absolutely beautiful! And there are no words to describe how delicious your lips look in this pic. :)
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BlondBeastBoy Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Steamy...

So are the crabs
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blumilein Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013   Photographer
Wow, this is amazing! :wow: :love:
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Lord-LestatDlaCuadra Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Professional Photographer
Great work! A bit strangre but awsome :XD:
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