La composición de la obra como siempre es buena, el retoque perfecto. Deberías ser actriz.
En esta fotografía si veo un error y es el cortar los dedos ¡Es un pecado! y más en esta fotografía en la que parte del cachete y el hombro pueden eliminarse para dar espacio a la mano (y aun manteniendo tus encuadres tan llenos.
El desenfoque en el hombro no me gusta ya que no entiendo esa suavidad enfrentada a la mano con tanta textura, a pesar de estar en el mismo plano.
Que conste que es una crítica tiquismiquis porque eres 1000 veces mejor que yo Besacos!
(I've never written a critique before, so I hope this is okay!)
This photograph is, so put it simply, stunning. I love the muted colour scheme and how her eye is the only hint of colour in the whole photograph - that does an amazing job of focusing you on her expression without detracting attention from anything else. The model's expression is very well done too: it can be quite easy for expressions such as this to look fake or forced, but this looks nothing but genuine. The model's position is something which caught my eye too; the way she has her shoulder brought up in front of the hedgehog suggests protection, but it hasn't been overdone (her shoulder isn't too far forward so that it takes over the whole photograph) Overall, this is brilliantly executed piece of photography - well done
Love how everyone says "oh I love the model" when the model is you!! Haha!! Anyway amazing photo as usual!! Just wondering what's up with the arm, looks crazily blurred and there are weird scribbly lines around the edges of your arm?!
En esta fotografía si veo un error y es el cortar los dedos ¡Es un pecado! y más en esta fotografía en la que parte del cachete y el hombro pueden eliminarse para dar espacio a la mano (y aun manteniendo tus encuadres tan llenos.
El desenfoque en el hombro no me gusta ya que no entiendo esa suavidad enfrentada a la mano con tanta textura, a pesar de estar en el mismo plano.
Que conste que es una crítica tiquismiquis porque eres 1000 veces mejor que yo
Besacos!
This photograph is, so put it simply, stunning. I love the muted colour scheme and how her eye is the only hint of colour in the whole photograph - that does an amazing job of focusing you on her expression without detracting attention from anything else. The model's expression is very well done too: it can be quite easy for expressions such as this to look fake or forced, but this looks nothing but genuine. The model's position is something which caught my eye too; the way she has her shoulder brought up in front of the hedgehog suggests protection, but it hasn't been overdone (her shoulder isn't too far forward so that it takes over the whole photograph)
Overall, this is brilliantly executed piece of photography - well done
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.