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Jul 22, 2011, 4:43:22 AM
the end. by Senju-HiMe the end. by Senju-HiMe
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Critique: the end by Senju-Hime

Image quality is excellent; the model/photographer has chosen a narrow focal plane, and while I always crave a deeper depth of image information the narrowing upon the right eye is effective in focusing the viewer. The use of reds and washed whites plays a delightful contrast together. The implications of the wooden stave echo the style of application and coloration of the makeups used. The lips are a black and red rouged cardiac flatline and eyes shadowed in spikes of rage at hand.
Composition: negative spaces of black and white with only the grey shadows of facial planes dappling the white. Eye travel path from focus point in pupil of right eye to pan outward with reds tracking to the brown of the stave and thence to mouth and returning to matched reds of eye orbits; a tender traverse of anger’s release for this viewer.
This young woman, as model, as image manipulator, as makeup artist, is a figure of note. Congratulations on once again touching many places within this critic, simultaneously.
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I love what you did to mute the pallette and saturate the reds in the frame. It looks like the field-of-view was narrow leaving one (very beautiful) eye in focus. This effect draws the eye back towards the vertical centerline or towards the nose. With all this emphasis on the top half of the image, it might have been interesting to see something reflected in the blade of the knife to draw the eye down a bit or to the left. A small tattoo or perhaps a drop of blood on the shoulder would balance the photo a bit more. The lips and hair color are beautifully matched and add significantly to the work. The emotion on the model's face really adds to the overall impact!! I hope these few words are somehow helpful:-)
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Ziruzadat Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
god, i love your work!
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"Most Excellent Presence . . . Methinks i Am Smitten ;) ! ! !"
deecee4 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Love the image, stuck in my head came out as a painting, [link]
birain20 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
I love this image, thank you
Tekkagunnar Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
Your work looks so cool! :dygel:
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RatButcher Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If I wrote a book, I would commission you to make the cover.
SoNnIcA13 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
me gusta mucho esta foto porque me recuerdas a las guerreras Kyoshi xD! no sé si las habrás visto (es de La leyenda de Aang: el último maestro aire o.o), en fin, volviendo al tema xD... es una gran foto o.o! me gusta mucho el maquillaje :meow:!
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endave Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love your entire collection! great photo's and make up!

I gave up trying to learn how to draw for over a year and was inspired by your picture to start up again :D I used it as a reference here [link]

It is my best drawing ever THANKS FOR THE INSPIRATION!!
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