Esta composición la veo totalmente correcta a nivel técnico y no hay pega alguna que pueda afirmar, así que me pondré mi gorro nazi, pero que conste que la veo perfecta.
La regla de los cuatro tercios implicaría que tus ojos y el bichito bajárais unos centímetros de la esquina para encontraros en el punto de atención, quedando mejor si se centrara toda la atención en el "beso" y no tan equilibrado repartiendo la importancia de la escena.
PD: Personalmente la dejaría como está, quizás ganaría 0,01% de intensidad con lo que te he dicho, pero creo que la composición y la idea son correctas a nivel técnico, es original, el retoque es exquisito y me sigues dando muchísima envidia.
I love this picture very much! It is very clean and white. I like that you put animals into your pictures and was exited when I saw the ferret! The way you are looking forward and the ferret is looking to the side makes it look even better in some unspoken way. Also to me it looks as if you were trying to copy the ferret's eye color and be the ferret yourself. I don't know if this was what you were going for or not, but everybody sees stuff differently and I still like it. I also like that you remembered to dye your eyebrows, too! I would of forgotten! xD Your lipstick also puts just the right amount of color to bring the picture to life. If it wasn't that color it would of been boring and plain. Also I guess this is the time to say this is my first critique and I always some how mess things up. So, if the rating is very low I did not mean it! I'm trying to figure this out and trust me your rating is shooting up there! I didn't give you all 5 stars though on vision since you didn't give a particular theme except the sleepyhead part and how you look tired in the picture. The thing is I wouldn't of known you were supposed to be tired if I didn't see the title and explanation. Maybe you aren't looking tired and that isn't what you were going for.... hmm... I don't know like I said this is my first critique so I might suck at this. XD Sorry! Hahaha, anyway I love you, your pictures, and I think you are an artistic genius. So thank you for putting this up for me to see and I hope you keep taking pictures forever!