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she promised. by Senju-HiMe she promised. by Senju-HiMe
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Self-portrait (both are me)

Pentax K-5 

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Other works:
oblivion. by Senju-HiMeradioactive. by Senju-HiMekill them. by Senju-HiMedream of Death. by Senju-HiMesaint. by Senju-HiMe
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This picture really hit me hard when I saw it in my list. I just had to see it and once I did, something drew me into it.
This paints a story, almost as if it were it's own fairy tale. The fact that it's a self portrait as well, and both are you is what really impacted me. It's as if the corrupt is saying to the innocent, "you promised me.." But what was the promise? Was it for her purity perhaps? Was it broken?
The use of the red in the nails, lips and hair gives it this sinful nature compared to the soft, natural you. Even the pose as well. Very wonderful contrast.
I guess what really made me fall in love with this photo was the meaning I got from it, and the questions. We all have good and evil in us. Sins and innocents. Which one will you feed and let flourish? And if so, will this fully consume the other half, or turn it into a monster of it's own..
Incredible work, truly. Keep it up.
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I'm not sure how well qualified I am to give a critique, but I will anyway!

I'll go ahead and start with technique since I'm in awe of yours. I'm absolutely amazed at how seamless the editing is. At first, I couldn't believe they were both you, as they both give off completely different personalities. As always, your editing skills have crushed it if I may be informal. The crisp contrast and clarity is balanced perfectly.. and I'm not sure this is intended or not, but it looks as if you airbrushed the girl on the left and left the right intentionally a little more rough. Either way, it's perfect. I love the girl in front's facial texture, and how gritty it almost is in contrast to the girl standing behind. It gives a dynamic quality to the photograph and draws someone in instantly.

As with all of your photographs, the impact of this piece is massive. I gave it 4 and a half stars only because I've seen others you've done that have just a little more impact than this one. The darkness to this photograph, I think, is why the impact is so massive. The lighting sets the mood perfectly.

Originality is obviously spoken for, but vision is a little lacking for me only because I feel the placement of the girl in the back is a little awkward (in a way that could not be fixed with more editing, but simply a different photo). I love where the hand is placed, but I feel like there could have been a better position to place her in that would've still kept it dynamic yet consistent. I personally (being someone who loves creepy photography), feel like you could've seemed slightly more possessive of the girl in front, because her face is shocked to a point that makes the girl in back look slightly drab (and I mean slightly).

I feel slightly guilty even giving such a critique, as this is far better than anything I've EVER done! But, nonetheless, it is a critique so I felt I should say something. Well done as always! xx - Liv
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mockingja-y Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hey, I just want to let you know that I drew a piece (sounds so weird) of this awesome photo! fav.me/d7b18fl
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Stunning!!!
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XxTriquetraxX Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this
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zoneekap Jan 19, 2014   Digital Artist
Amazing work!
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:iconneutron88:
pretty! this is beautiful work.
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yvART Jan 14, 2014   Photographer
This gorgeous work has been featured here: People and Portraits Spotlight Vol. 88.
Looking forward to seeing more art from you at devPREMIUM!

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DesireeDelgado Jan 14, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
¿Qué le prometió? La eterna juventud? Una vida nueva? Un amor? Una muerte? Sin duda, es una foto que invita a crear una historia.
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:icongrey990:
Very expressive photo
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lintu47 Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello :wave:
You have been featured in my weekly dA love for everyone! article.
Have a nice day! :dalove:
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