persimon.

I don't how you do it, but all your colors always bring a natural feel. They even compliment the other colors used in that single photo. One thing I did notice before reading the other critique's was the orange eye line color. Although I like the shade, I have to agree it does look slightly edited. I noticed that on the skin some parts seemed smoother than others, I thought only a blur effect for a touch up would cause that. Sure enough it was, that right there is what you want to avoid. Not the tool itself, but the part where people notice it from just a few glances.

I also noticed your neck, I'm gonna guess you used a camera which focus's on the foreground, or a blur tool. Either way it looks great, it draws more attention to your face and everything going on in front of the supposed lens. The eye color is beautiful, btw. A combination of that, plus the expressions go well together. I really like this, I love seeing how creative people can be doing what they love. Awesome job!!!
Sorry I accidently posted this in the comments section, I'm still new to using this site...Sorta.