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Self-portrait

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Pentax k5
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Critique by xxmagicsymphonyxx Mar 30, 2012, 6:51:02 PM
VISION - I love the colors and how they mixed well in this picture.:) I can't say I have a good eye for art but it has given justice to it's title- MEMOIRS. I could feel that the girl reminisces painful memories for crying like that in the rain. And RED. I really love that color so, you got me in there. :))

ORIGINALITY - I gave 4 stars because I've seen a lot of photos with poses like this. :) But this one so far is very good.

TECHNIQUE - I really love the way on how you make her red lips so vibrant and really red. :)) The white lines that must be the raindrops would need a little more good technique on how you do it because it doesn't seem quite really rain-like (in my own opinion).

IMPACT - but still. This made a big impact too me. I just love how pale her skin was and how dark her red lips and hair are. :) I love the contrast. I saw the emotion in the art too and so- BANG! There is impact! Plus that fantastic and neat signature!

- I hope this will help you somehow. :))
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Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Filmographer
This is so beautiful! I love this concept and composition! Congratulations!
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blanket86 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful! I love this composition and concept! Congratulations!
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:iconsoleilnoire:
Soleilnoire Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Toujours ces couleurs super intense!
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EPIllustrations Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
wow :heart:
truly inspiring o_o
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:iconivan-77:
IVAN-77 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Impresionant and very artistic work...Congrats.
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augenweide Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
your beautiful work is featured in my new journal...[link]
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vyankkapinkrock14 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Love that lips <3
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StoneButterflies Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love how the lips turned out. :)
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gInGeRjEm Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
beautiful
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Valkiria19 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Student General Artist
*-* tengo una foto parecida a esta!!
Aunque la tuya es inmejorable, en serio eres apasionante
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TheWombat21 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
Love it :D :love:
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schilles-photography Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Reminds me of "Memoirs of a Geisha". Lovely
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Michela-Riva Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Professional Photographer
Hi! This amazing work has been featured in our Weekly Light Hunters #7 by =finomrs
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caiticox Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
Oh my gosh!! I love this! Wonderful job!! :D
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:iconsoraroks:
soraroks Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful.
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ColorMyDay Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wauw, lovely picture!
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DontTouchTheMap Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is so perfect! it looks like a painting :)
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:iconali9321:
ali9321 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE IT
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:icontrashins:
Trashins Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
nice=)
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:iconbobmas:
Bobmas Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing!!!!!
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EvilBryan357 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
awesome :)
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I-Eat-Bishie Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student Writer
She looks so beautiful!
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CariTheCannibalChick Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you have the most beautiful lips ive ever seen, im so jealous, i have such thin lips n.n
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Rivendora Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Not only artistically admirable, but you are so stunninly georgous!!!
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ExaltedPoet Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:squee:
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crystalive Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
I saw this and was just like, 'wow'. The water/light/whatever you did makes your skin look so pretty and glowy, but in a natural way that seems so amazing.
And i must ask you, what you did with your lips, because they are amazing! If that's just a lipstick/gloss, I would really like to know what brand it is.
The over-all affect is just beautiful, and when i see it the word 'reminiscent' comes to mind.
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ValeNyan Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Que geniaal *O*
Una pregunta, el efecto de los labios "Perfectos" lo haces con photoshop o maquillaje?
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Nina-Lovett Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012   Traditional Artist
Liiiiips *_* <3 Love it.
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RavenousKnightress Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful lips! loving the colors (:
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gizelle08 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ooooo you looking goood loving it :boogie:
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Cromhb Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
i'm not a critic but i love it
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Wintella Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Recently, it was hard for me to find something in you pics that are more my style. This one comes in time :) But I will always prefer your Tuttu Frutti series...
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merylxsniper Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Love the expression
x.x!
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:iconkeenzo:
Keenzo Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
Just WOW! Stunning!
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Vanitas4ever Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
luv it! <3
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SunGirlProductions Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your lips really pop out at the viewer here :heart: beautiful!
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Mitia-Arcturus Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
GREAT...:heart::heart::heart:
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snowlwolfcat Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome job as usual. I didn't find anything wrong at all. (that's why I didn't write a real critique). Sorry about that. Really good though. Absolutely loved it!
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Shutter-Shooter Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I like this one a lot, especially that little drop on your chin and your lips. i'm so glad you brought a new camera because i see it has motivated you to take more astounding photos. :clap:
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TheGirlWhoDreamed Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
I love!!

soooooo wish I could take photos like yours,
They are brilliant
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therainbowsshadow Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Brava, dear, this is magnificent :clap: it *feels* like memoirs of melancholy, & I absolutely love it :heart: :+fav:
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
Amazing!
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isalou Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
Superbe !
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vampireseen Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
if u like my work u can follow me on link damn :D
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GeorgeGoodnight Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very expressive portrait
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wilbodwane Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
What an effect. Just brilliant,they are so film studio material. I just love them.
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toberkitty Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Incredible work as usual. I would love to see the process behind your images.
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Shaleco Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This picture reminds me of rose from the movie "titanic" after she escapes from the water
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piquantgirl Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your new hairstyle :D
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Camera Data

Make
PENTAX
Model
PENTAX K-5
Shutter Speed
1/200 second
Aperture
F/1.4
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Jul 15, 2011, 4:09:43 AM
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Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
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