Haha! Funny and cheerful I found your gallery by chance and was really amazed I haven't seen such photos before))) And I enjoy your art, dear! The lemon theme is pretty touching and you have fresh vision But probably this pic needs some PS edition still it's adorable and I don't insist. Good colours and composition
Vision I've already said that it looks gorgerous))) Originality: Brilliant! Very clever. Technique Honestly it's too simple to shoot Impact Kind and funny picture so I couldn't resist
Keep shooting this way and don't be afraid of using PS a bit more! My final word is: Beautiful!
Firstly it has to be said that I love this piece, the concept behind it and the entire series of images. Of the Tutti Frutti series I feel that this image is the best executed of them all.
I love the use of yellow, black, and white in this image. I feel the black lipstick gives a great focal point and detracts from your eyes, which would otherwise steal the show. Unfortunately, because it IS a focal point, I find it hard to ignore the crumbs of black make-up that have spilled onto the lemon slice. A little postwork would get rid of those easily and make the whole shot just that little bit cleaner.
The expression and modelling is brilliant here - very well done. You managed almost perfect symmetry, which can't have been easy with a lemon in your mouth and an expression like that! I do, however, feel it would have had a greater impact if the crop hadn't chopped off the arch of your eyebrows.
Overall I am very, VERY impressed with this. It's bright, bold, and beautiful - you can taste the lemon rind in your mouth, and feel the sourness on your own tongue, just from viewing the image. 8.5/10
I found your gallery by chance and was really amazed
I haven't seen such photos before))) And I enjoy your art, dear!
But probably this pic needs some PS edition
still it's adorable and I don't insist.
Good colours and composition
Vision
Originality:
Technique
Impact
Keep shooting this way and don't be afraid of using PS a bit more!
My final word is: Beautiful!
I love the use of yellow, black, and white in this image. I feel the black lipstick gives a great focal point and detracts from your eyes, which would otherwise steal the show. Unfortunately, because it IS a focal point, I find it hard to ignore the crumbs of black make-up that have spilled onto the lemon slice. A little postwork would get rid of those easily and make the whole shot just that little bit cleaner.
The expression and modelling is brilliant here - very well done. You managed almost perfect symmetry, which can't have been easy with a lemon in your mouth and an expression like that! I do, however, feel it would have had a greater impact if the crop hadn't chopped off the arch of your eyebrows.
Overall I am very, VERY impressed with this. It's bright, bold, and beautiful - you can taste the lemon rind in your mouth, and feel the sourness on your own tongue, just from viewing the image. 8.5/10
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