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Self-portrait

Taken with Pentax K-5

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:iconmigueldelacruz:
En este caso el desenfoque no me convence, inclusive habría puesto el 100% de la escena enfocada.

El pelo necesita en mi opinión un pelín más de textura, ya que está quemado, que queda bien pero creo que quedaría mejor con un poquito menos (quizás es por subirlo a menor resolución o por el desenfoque).

Un dedo por encima de las cejas daría un encuadre más acertado.

Solo te pongo lo malo, pero que sepas que es increíblemente buena.
Trasmite con los colores exactamente la frialdad y centra la atención perfectamente en ojos y labios sin recurrir al ya ultraexplotado "tó pa b&n y los labios en rojo". Me gusta.
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:iconattilaalexovics:
Let me write a real critique, as requested. So at first please forgive me - I will write only my viewpoint and not just one of your teen fun.
Plus: originality, expressions, knowledge of catching the right moment.
Minus: bad cut (rule of thirds - dont becap/behead models for closeup as possible)..but dont afraid I am doing it lot also :), saturated colors and retouch are not clean and too strong (for me), always the same style..bit boring, please shoot some new theme not only headshots, or flat/softy lighting - but hard shadows, hard lights, lighting with mirror etc. - this will do the contrast, not only makeup and saturation in PS.
Anyway the pic impressed me lot, great job, well done.
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`Angelles-LaVeau Jan 31, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Love this!!!
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~Jennerdstro Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE YOUR WORK!
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:iconlionschool:
!LionSchool Oct 23, 2012  Professional
Mmm.. :3
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:iconlunavelobeth:
*LunaVelobeth Sep 28, 2012   Digital Artist
Featured here: [link] :huggle:
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:iconmad62:
~mad62 Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is it a wig or photoshop for the hair ?
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:iconwingcz:
A very impressive photo. How did you make the white paint on the face to be so bright? Is it because of postrpocessing, or you found some good white colour? Havent had luck with finding one so far.
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:iconleitman:
~Leitman Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wow stunning great
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~FollowinTheBlackBird Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
She has such a lost kind of look in her eyes. She is lovely.
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~Rollingboxes Aug 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Great photo. :)
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:iconduppik:
very beautiful eyes ^^
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