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Currant. I'm not really sure if I like them or not. At first they are not good, but them as I chew them they taste great!

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From my tutti frutti series:
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Critique by theuniqueproxy Feb 10, 2012, 2:25:16 PM
first thing to say: the colors match really good and the contrast between red, the eye color (green, blue, white/grey) and skin color is making you look at it many times, but I think it would have been better to make the lips in the same color as the berries - you should change the light colors with the dark colors, because then it would look exactly like the fruits

the tongue is really great made as well as the eyes and the berries, especially, because they are really shiny

I'm seeing lines around the fruits, the lips and the nose, the left side is ok, but the on the right side there shouldn't be these hard lines around the berries
if both sides were looking alike it wouldn't even bother, but if one side is different than the other it's strange

I don't know what program you are using but draw the lines softer next time and use the dark color, not the light

BUT it's really a great picture, you're expression is wonderful and I want to eat theses fruits now
I'm just telling you, you could make it even better

(please don't mind my bad English)
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The first thing that grabs my attention is the red. Red, everywhere. The red eyeshadow emphasises the green of your eye, which works really well because it's the only colour on the photo which doesn't fit in with the red-ish colour scheme. Your eye stands out and it is the second thing which grabs my attention. Then, I notice that your lips have the same sheen as do the currants, making them almost blend in - but it is an even more similar tone to the eyeshadow, making your features differ slightly to the fruit (although still red). This, in comparison to your flawlessly pale skin creates quite an impact. Your eyebrow peeking out from the top of the photo is an auburn too, which only draws me into that eye even more - the shadows and contours in it are so well-defined. Everything is flawless - from the sheen on the perfectly rounded fruits to the white of the eye - and it gives the photo a slightly other-wordly feel, also. Beautiful!
The only reason that impact is four stars and not five is that having seen all of your fruit series, which I love, it doesn't create as much as an impact as it would if it was the first time I'd seen these!
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SimulatedSympathy Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
All of your work is so amazing. I love it!
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nightrose0087 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
holy hell this is so clear! what kind of camera and lenses do you use?
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PhaserRave Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Excuse me, you, uh, have something... on your face. No, to the left a little bit. No, that didn't get it... nevermind.
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x85x85 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Interface Designer
THEY ARE PERFECT 
I WANT TO PAINT THEM ALL 
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uidarbra Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome shot! I love the colors! xD

yeah, I tried hard to like groselha but..nah lol I think it tastes like soap
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EmilyHitchcock Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so lovely! Do you mind if I draw it? I would credit and link you fully.

Thanks :)
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gInabr0wn Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Filmographer
wooooow
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Alembic-Lynx Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Professional Photographer
incredible
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elisa-b Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is painfully creative! Just amazing!
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ninatskasleev Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
Your lips look like they're drawn,not like a photo!
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KatrinKing Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
I can't decide which of this incredible series is the best. They are all absolut stunning.
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Brooque613 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student General Artist
I actually just found these pictures through an article that was written about you.
They are fantastic!
I love the concept of the collection. The shots are great, and the makeup is amazing. :)
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soophieO Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
I used your photo as drawing reference [link]
Hope you don't mind. If you do I will take it down ;)
Please let me know.
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somebody2978 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012   Digital Artist
buenisima!
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loliilololii Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
im not original, but this series is wonderful, particularly this one :heart:
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clarapnaraujo Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to use this as a reference for a drawing... may I?
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MelR4eva Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
love the lipstick <3
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Do0dleBug Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So pretty. XD
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aaronm2712 Featured By Owner May 7, 2012
i am in love with your work totally inspired wish id found it sooner !
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mahloureiro Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012
awesome!
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DanielRamirez Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I made a drawing of this photo, please take a look at it!!! [link]
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Kissed-By-Coldness Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student Photographer
I like the way you edit photos.
How do you make them look so painted?
What technique do you use?
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Fayleah Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012   Traditional Artist
These don't look like photos. :/ They look like drawings/paintings/etc. Do you "paint" over them digitally? Because there are tons of misplaced shadows and highlights. :/ Is it just your style or what? Did you place it in the wrong category?
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LumppSum Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
i don't see any misplaced shadows, nor highlights
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Merween Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't really know why, it reminds me Nina Hagen.
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Schicksalsgoettin Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
you got featured here [link] - hope you like it! :blackrose:
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DumpsterKid Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
featured ya here.
hope u dont mind.
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EtoileLituanienne Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Student Writer
Everyone says that this photo is so awesome but I find it kinda creepy... Sorry
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Ashdancer Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012   General Artist
What paint products do you use? They look really good.
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Em-em-125 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
One of the most beautiful images I have seen today!!
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Idaliach Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Esta genial tu trabajo!! felicidades!!
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C0lorfulBubbles Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
This looks so ethereal!
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EdsonSeabra Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Photographer
simplesmente Sensacional !
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rebandvodka Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, you are unbelievable! i am at once insanely jealous and incredibly awed by the magnificence. definitely watching.
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majowaaaa Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow !
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Cryptidseeker101 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
One thing that I notice, and love, is that you use complimentary colors.
I love that, and wish more people did.
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ChaotikFalls Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
Incredible! unique and beautiful! :3
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MaddLouise Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I saw this on the homepage! :thumbsup: This collection just keeps amazing me :nod: I like how you seem to be burried in the fruit here.
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Zuruzu Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
This EFFING freaks me out.
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squ33furtheships Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol
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squ33furtheships Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol, i thought it was a cranberry, grape. but as i read the discription, i read that it was a currant! :dead:
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R3d-Rav3n Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
INSANE!!! :XD:
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SeishinLa Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG!!!! This is amazing! You're awesome!!! And i think she's creepy ,D!
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trueful145 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
m-miku hastune
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Bi22 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can I use it as inventory ?
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goldie-s Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
NO WAY. I LOVE IT!
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DuD1997 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
beautiful :huggle:
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FeelingsOnPictures Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
i'm so jealous of this lovely photograph!
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akleski Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
in ~theuniqueproxy's critique:
I'm seeing lines around the fruits, the lips and the nose, the left side is ok, but the on the right side there shouldn't be these hard lines around the berries
if both sides were looking alike it wouldn't even bother, but if one side is different than the other it's strange

I don't know what program you are using but draw the lines softer next time and use the dark color, not the light

Those lines are hard to see at first, but no doubt this could be done slightly better. If you used Photoshop for cloning that left cluster of currants, you should spend more time carefully drawing the selection (preferably with a Pen Tool) and then fine-tune it with a Refine Edge mask (aaaand it there's still something wrong, you can put the duplicated layer into a new Group and add another mask).



Apart from this, I agree with both the reviews - this is another great photo from you, a great addition to your Tutti Frutti series.

Keep up the good work, cheers~! :happybounce:

+faV :+fav:
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akleski Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ps. if this was already mentioned by someone else, then sorry - i didnt have time to read all the comments here ;P
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