the way you combine style of fruit with color is truly special!!! now every time i stare at this pictures with fruit in it, i get hungry!!! they way you combine the yellow is in perfect contrast towards the carambola is exquisite. it sets off the paleness of the girl's face, but in a good way frankly, it reminds me of those fruit cups without the cup part; this is a really great pictures and can't wait for you to do more of your artistic originality and style towards these paintings; thanks for showing this to us keep up the good work
This is my first critique so just warning you now. :3
Every time I see your photos with fruit it makes me hungry for some healthy food. I'm in love with the colors of the photo. It's simply stunning, and the colors clash together. The detail of the photo really pops out as well, especially near the eyes and lip / fruit. The lighting of the photo is also excellently done.
The only thing I see that would need a little improvement would be near the nose, it's not as clear as other parts. Also it looks like the fruit in your mouth has no grip on anything.
But even through the flaws, this is an amazing shot.
I like it, but the only problem I have is the way the piece of fruit was edited into the mouth looks awkwardly placed. Her teeth and lip are not holding it in place so it as though it is just floating in front of her mouth.