I don't do a critique very often, so I'm sorry if there's something I'm missing or not enunciating enough.
Overall, this image lacks the wow-factor of a lot of the photos in your gallery. You said that this was an experiment, and so for that I think it is quite good--certainly better than any of my experiments! I do like the make-up here. It's very clean and precise--especially the lips. It feels very European to me and I understand where you were going with this. I like that your eyes are very clean to allow your lips to really shine.
However, the light is quite harsh. I find it unflattering, especially on the nose, chin, and teeth. I also find the crop a bit unflattering as well. I would like to have seen your hair and your neck/collarbones as well.
Overall, this image is okay. Certainly not the best in your gallery, but not the worst thing I've ever seen by far.
Youre beautiful! I love the eyes, the look you command in them. You're mouth, fits perfectly. Just you're overall expression, love. I can't see anything beyond the picture, but it kinda reminds me of the 80's, for no reason. They wore bright red lipstick, and their eyelashs exactly like that. You're really breath taking, and sometimes you're peices leave me speachless, and in a good way. What I see in you're work is- It's hard to explain. I feel like there is always a story behind it, or I CAN make a story behind it, to fit in with it. Maybe that is why I am speechless. Too many thoughts run rough my head when I click on the tab, and you're work shows up.
Thank YOU for sharing with us, you're amazingly talented. ( I ALSO love, love, love how I can see almost every detail. Visionary is beautiful, Orginality perfection, Techique superb, Impact...inspiring,. ^_^ You truely come off elegent and flawless. )
Your work is amazing, its beautifully shot, composed, lit, coloured and presented. subjects are well thought out and it compiles an amazing collection. I look forward to seeing more.
Overall, this image lacks the wow-factor of a lot of the photos in your gallery. You said that this was an experiment, and so for that I think it is quite good--certainly better than any of my experiments! I do like the make-up here. It's very clean and precise--especially the lips. It feels very European to me and I understand where you were going with this. I like that your eyes are very clean to allow your lips to really shine.
However, the light is quite harsh. I find it unflattering, especially on the nose, chin, and teeth. I also find the crop a bit unflattering as well. I would like to have seen your hair and your neck/collarbones as well.
Overall, this image is okay. Certainly not the best in your gallery, but not the worst thing I've ever seen by far.
Thank YOU for sharing with us, you're amazingly talented. ( I ALSO love, love, love how I can see almost every detail. Visionary is beautiful, Orginality perfection, Techique superb, Impact...inspiring,. ^_^ You truely come off elegent and flawless. )
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