Youre beautiful! I love the eyes, the look you command in them. You're mouth, fits perfectly. Just you're overall expression, love. I can't see anything beyond the picture, but it kinda reminds me of the 80's, for no reason. They wore bright red lipstick, and their eyelashs exactly like that. You're really breath taking, and sometimes you're peices leave me speachless, and in a good way. What I see in you're work is- It's hard to explain. I feel like there is always a story behind it, or I CAN make a story behind it, to fit in with it. Maybe that is why I am speechless. Too many thoughts run rough my head when I click on the tab, and you're work shows up.
Thank YOU for sharing with us, you're amazingly talented. ( I ALSO love, love, love how I can see almost every detail. Visionary is beautiful, Orginality perfection, Techique superb, Impact...inspiring,. ^_^ You truely come off elegent and flawless. )
I don't do a critique very often, so I'm sorry if there's something I'm missing or not enunciating enough.
Overall, this image lacks the wow-factor of a lot of the photos in your gallery. You said that this was an experiment, and so for that I think it is quite good--certainly better than any of my experiments! I do like the make-up here. It's very clean and precise--especially the lips. It feels very European to me and I understand where you were going with this. I like that your eyes are very clean to allow your lips to really shine.
However, the light is quite harsh. I find it unflattering, especially on the nose, chin, and teeth. I also find the crop a bit unflattering as well. I would like to have seen your hair and your neck/collarbones as well.
Overall, this image is okay. Certainly not the best in your gallery, but not the worst thing I've ever seen by far.
Hmm, I have to agree in large part with Roslein's critique. That makeup's good... But I can't find any emotion in your face: It feels more like a drugged out look than anything. That fact's not helped by the harsh light/high contrast: It takes away from the beauty of those lips and instead makes your skin look quite rough, what with all the powder particles and fine hairs all over your face.
I really feel alone here... But I have to say I don't like this one. It's far from what we're used to see from you, I mean, wonders! powerful pose, great make up... No offense, but here it looks like you were about to sneeze. Sorry... I don't say it to be bad or anything, but just because I'm tired of seeing all those "waouh"s, "great !"s about your work, with no critic or anything. I'm not premium, otherwise I would have posted an "official" critique. Well, to conclude, you can make much, much better than that, you can make art, so why trying to be as insipid, dull as all those magazine models you inspired of? Mmh, you're worth more than this.
I am a big fan of Yours, but I do not like this one..hard light on the tip of the nose, on the root of the nose..small hair on the face, hard shadow of the teeth in the mouth and on the sides of the chin or in the eye, I believe it is oversharpened, crop is unflattering and face is not exactly straight (line of the eyes 'falls' to the left)..one of Your worse works IMO.