Okay, first of all I'm not really in position to be giving critiques or anything but it's good for practice and such, right?
Anyways, I really adore this whole piece. The colours are wonderfully vibrant, and some of the details are really amazing, like where the plant pokes into her skin. That's just a random details and things like that are what I love. The eye is simply gorgeous as well, which I don't really need to go into detail about. The whole thing is fairly surreal and original, as are many of your works, and they are always a pleasure to see.
The only things I would point out perhaps include the eyebrow. I just feel as though a more pronounced eyebrow would have a stronger impact, thought I don't know if you purposely made it sort of dusty-looking or whether it was just an insignificant part in the photo. Also, the eye makeup is sort of clumpy. Now, as a female, I definitely understand that makeup it stupid and hard to make smooth, plus you might have intended it this way, so that was just another point. Finally I would just take notice to the lips, which look rather flat or fake, maybe that's just a result of editing or the lipstick but more details in the lips or something is what I would suggest, personally.
Thanks for sharing your work! It's always so beautiful and interesting.
You always create oh so interesting compositions. I love this!!! It is SO sensual and suggestive... The color of the grain and the diagonal drag the eye past your parted lips, then to your eye hiding behind them. Color, lighting, composition/layout of the image is (as with all your images) spot on. May I just say that you are so awesome in this medium. Instant !!!!!