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Self-portrait

Pentax K-5 

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Okay, first of all I'm not really in position to be giving critiques or anything but it's good for practice and such, right?

Anyways, I really adore this whole piece. The colours are wonderfully vibrant, and some of the details are really amazing, like where the plant pokes into her skin. That's just a random details and things like that are what I love. The eye is simply gorgeous as well, which I don't really need to go into detail about. The whole thing is fairly surreal and original, as are many of your works, and they are always a pleasure to see.

The only things I would point out perhaps include the eyebrow. I just feel as though a more pronounced eyebrow would have a stronger impact, thought I don't know if you purposely made it sort of dusty-looking or whether it was just an insignificant part in the photo. Also, the eye makeup is sort of clumpy. Now, as a female, I definitely understand that makeup it stupid and hard to make smooth, plus you might have intended it this way, so that was just another point. Finally I would just take notice to the lips, which look rather flat or fake, maybe that's just a result of editing or the lipstick but more details in the lips or something is what I would suggest, personally.

Thanks for sharing your work! It's always so beautiful and interesting.
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Jmaybury Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, this is stunning, Great Shot
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XxTriquetraxX Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing!
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DianaNohelova Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Professional Photographer
This is so sharp and intense, love it!
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ihamo Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Beautiful :)
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JACAC Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
a m a z i n g . a s . a l w a y s . =)
m a y . 2014 . m a k e . y o u . s m i l e 
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TornadoMetVolcano Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow! 
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N1KK1-A Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
The strong contrast in color is absolutely beautiful!!  And it is very realistic at the same time!! :iconclapplz:
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Professional General Artist
:iconcternetea::iconsquirrelflight-77:Your artwork has been graciously featured in Titans Christmas feature ,stay wonderful!Hug:iconsquirrelflight-77::iconcternetea:
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franxxxholic Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG so fking beautibul. Thpse eyes... those lips... I have to love it till the end of time... 
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snowlwolfcat Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Strong. Powerful. That's all I have to say. 

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chinoise56 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You always create oh so interesting compositions. I love this!!! It is SO sensual and suggestive... :love:
The color of the grain and the diagonal drag the eye past your parted lips, then to your eye hiding behind them. Color, lighting, composition/layout of the image is (as with all your images) spot on. May I just say that you are so awesome in this medium.
Instant :+fav: !!!!!
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blacklothussayshello Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is a wonderful drawning! *O*
So beautiful, it is hard to describe it
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:iconclaristan:
claristan Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
wonderful
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:iconredbuck:
Redbuck Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Student
So beautiful! The movement of the weeds and the tilt of your head create super strong diagonals! Love the open mouth, it makes me think she's in some kind of distress, especially hiding behind the grass. And I love your eyebrows!!!
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December-Rainfall Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
Miley Cyrus, please stop licking everything. :bleh:
(Just a thought that popped into my head when I saw this. No offense was/is intended. Only in jest.) :jester::boo:
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mecengineer Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
impressive
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xSakuraKurox Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
..Wow *-*
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Katsuyko Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A little bit too... plastic for me.
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the reds! Very nice. :D
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JazzyJuvenile Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
WOW! The red is absolutely gorgeous! I also love the focus on the eye, even through all the red. Great photo!
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PaijeEleyPhotography Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Professional Photographer
really amazing 
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yorugirl56 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
amazing!! :)

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Shedboy68 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really caught my eye..Gorgeous work! :heart: :clap:
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Cholul123 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
very pretty shot
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:iconmermadine:
mermadine Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
awesome
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:iconpetitpomme:
petitpomme Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Professional Photographer
This is breathtaking
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danielag82 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wonderful colours my dear :aww:
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nightrose0087 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful as always.
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LNDFrance Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The contrast is marvellous. Between the colours, but also between the colour pink and the title... "la vie en rose" isn't so happy after all.
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PENTAX
Model
PENTAX K-5
Shutter Speed
1/80 second
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F/2.0
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Feb 24, 2013, 4:50:05 AM
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